--Originally published at Coder Bebop
I have come to terms with this story appearing half-caricature half-reality, in a way. It is very hard to portray a highly complex working environment and boil it into an interesting story at the same time. I have no experience whatsoever on these types of business, and the reasons for things happening in a certain way make sense the most if not all of the instances. I am saying this because I still would find it hard to believe, as we read in this chapter, that ONLY ONE PERSON REALIZED THE SPECS WERE BALONEY!
And this is sometimes what I mean when I say I am not sure about Webster as a protagonist. Sure, it is a confusing environment (with him being kidnapped and brought on to reconstruct a country through tech), and he needs to maintain a firm grip and assurance that what they are doing is no-nonsensical, but him not admitting that he did not understand the specs himself appeared weird to me; I suspect it had to do with the way the author presented the situation. Let’s remember:
Webster had just taken three hours to read the RGS spec before joining the group at day’s end.
The Deadline, Page 205
That is all the information we are given about the specs before turning them into a major conflict in the chapter. Would it not have made more sense to see Webster actually try to read it? I mean, if someone just spent three hours reading a book, you would automatically expect that person to bring in some knowledge on it, right? Especially if that reading is going to be trouble for later. We could have seen Webster have some struggles with the read, maybe even get a glimpse of what the specs sheet says that is so Continue reading "The Deadline – Chapter 16"